Wednesday, 3 July 2013

EAP 140 AM - WANG, Lingshan - Week 7 4/4

I read the Part 13 of Bedford today, and I noticed lots of meaningful grammar rules which need to be looked out.
Sometimes it is easy for me to ignore the consistency in personal pronouns. 
e.g.
1)We have many responsible teachers in our school, and the teachers give us the best education. 
You can develop your academic and creative thoughts in here.  In this sentence, we must be the only personal pronoun when you makes the meaning be confused.
In addition, using both indirect and direct questions in a sentence is wrong. 
e.g.
2)I am not sure whether Mike arrived home and, if he did, would he call me again?  
The second half of the sample cannot be a direct question, which can be changed as, whether he would call me again.
Usually, I do not know the right way to make verbs consistent, especially when there are more than two verbs.  
e.g.
3)Everyone finishes the homework, gives it to teachers, and gets the grades in at least two days.

1 comment:

Carrie Friend said...

Your blogs show that you are thinking about the grammar and information taught in class. You are writing about grammar and strategies, and also giving example sentences. Be sure to check the grammar in your example sentences as there are mistakes some of your examples. 6/10

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