Monday, 17 June 2013

EAP 140 AM - WANG, Lingshan - Week 5 2/4

Today I reviewed something about how to repair sentence fragments.  We can repair most sentence fragments by two ways, one of them is either pull the fragment into a nearby sentence, the other way is to rewrite the fragment as a complete sentence. We need to attach fragmented subordinate clauses or turn them into sentence.

e.g.
1)I don't think Kevin will come back this summer. Because he hurt his legs.
  Correct : I don't think Kevin will come back this summer because he hurt his legs.
Or "Because Kevin hurt his legs, I do not think he will come back this summer."
2)I like apple juice. And banana ice-cream.
  Correct : I like apple juice and banana ice-cream.

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